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T.L.O.T.E P.3 - Request

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You were at the park, Best friend on your right hand side squeezing your hand tightly as the man you had seen at the park, Ivan, approached the both of you; a bright smile on his face, and his violet eyes seemed to sparkle with the bright light of the sun.

"U-uh-"

"Sooooo, who are YOU?" Your friend smirked brightly, eyes him with a particular glance of approval.

"Ivan… me and… ____ was it?" you nodded slowly, and he continues "We met before… maybe a week ago" he chuckled lightly "she didn't talk much, and I didn't get a very good look at her… what a shame I hadn't seen you before, your quiet beautiful"

You froze up slightly, you face flushed a bright red, you heard him and Eliza laugh at this, you finally looked away in extremely embarrassed.

"t-thank you…" his comment had both taken you back with surprise that he had actually called you beautiful… that man that you couldn't get off your mind for a week straight, and the other fact was because the only person that had ever called you beautiful was… Ludwig.

a warm hand rubbed your back gently as you leaned against his shoulder.

"____?" you heard his thick German accent, almost a song in your ear as you stared at the movie screen.

"Yes Luddy?" you cooed, your voice saying his name as if it was everything to you.

"You're beautiful, frau…." He rested his head gently on yours and the two of you continues watching the movie.


You shook your head at that thought, apparently not even a second had passed since the both of them where still laughing.

"Haha, well Ivan it's awesome meeting you!" Eliza shook his hand, but he only looked at you with that bright smile.

"And you, Elizabeta" he nodded, holding his hand to you next, which you took with little hesitation.

"I hope to see you again soon" his smile seemed to be a little wider, your blush deepened but you nodded hastily. "Maybe we could go out to dinner one day, DA?" you opened your mouth to protest, to say maybe it was too soon to go out with someone but a bright, and happy voice interrupted your abruptly.

"She'd love to!" Eliza gripped your shoulders tightly, you flinched at that, and sighed, nodding your head once again.

"I guess it wouldn't kill to get out of the house…" Your cheeks had gone back to normal now, until he spoke.

"How about tonight then?" he asked, his purple eyes keeping your mesmerized as you stared into them. 'D-damn it ____! You can't just like this… you… you only just met him!'

"Uh… sure why not, I have nothing better to do" with that, he smiled even wider, you smiled as well, and Eliza laughed. You now had dinner plans, and you felt much better, from meeting him in the rain on a park bench one day, and the next, you're now going on a date with him. Before leaving you had given him your phone number and Eliza gave him her house address.

While all this had happened, a certain pair of blue eyes had been watching you from a far, his fists clenched as he watched the man that waved to you as you walked on. Unbeknownst by you all. He had heard everything.

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You sat on the porch, having to hold the skirt Eliza had forced you to wear, it was odd, only going up to... well above your knees, your shirt you felt was just a little to revealing. What did this Hungarian woman have in mind? You weren't sure, she'd done this before and well that had gotten you a boyfriend, but maybe Ivan was different.

"_____?" You looked up to see your date pull up in a big, white hummer 'So much for going Eco'. Getting up, you walked down the stairs, trying to keep your balance in the heels Eliza had let your barrow. Oh big mistake. How could she walk in these things? They were horrible; you could barely stand for that matter!

You sighed, ignoring that, but only watched him as he held the door open for you with a gentle smile.

"Hello ____" He closed the passenger door before you could answer, and walked around to the driver's side before getting in himself "You ready?"

"Y-Yea... I guess" you had really chosen not to talk much, just try to learn more about him before anything really happened between the two of you… now you were planning everything weren't you? You had really only just met, not need to already plan the wedding and the names of your children. Wait… what?!

"Where are we going…?" you stared out the windshield, watching the world go by with your bright, curious (e/c) eyes,

"A place called…." He thought for a moment "I'm not that good with French" he laughed softly "But I think it's called Botay do Goo"

"You mean Beauté du Goût?"

"Yes… my French is terrible" it was obvious, with that thick Russian accent, that you have come to adore so.

"It's fine, really" You laugh gently, watching as he pulled into the parking lot. You saw the bright red neon sign, its letters twirling over each other to create a word, you jumped suddenly when your door was pulled open, and a hand extended to take yours.

"Thanks Ivan…" you smiled gently.

"It's nothing ____"
Part three?! :dummy:

I hate this
it's so sloppy
it sucks
i don't like it
ahhh
grammar
no enough words
to short
the list of why i hate it goes oonnn

This is requests by: :iconteenagedreemerz: who is actually writing a comic about this fanfic. so go check her out!!

um nothing really to say about this except that i hate it, i actually just may add alot of things describe it better add a few lines and change the ending? NOT SURE xD

Part 2 -> [link]
Part 4 -> (OMG I LIED THIS WONT BE A TRILOGY)

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;A; Moar please? This is so good!